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Tuesday 5 July 2016

T.R.E.E Structure for Recounts

T.R.E.E Structure for Recounts




Fill in the table below thinking about the parts that make up a recount. You can copy and paste from the article if you wish.

T
Title
Injured mountain biker
R
Reveal - Who was involved? Where did it happen? When did it happen? Why did it happen? How?
The mountain biker,mountains,recently,he was riding and smashed into the bottom of the mountain
E
Events - what happened? In the order they happened.
First he smashed into the ground and then he called for help and was leaving his self in agony
E
Ending - How did it end? Final thoughts.
He could have been saved


What this video. Imagine that you were the police officer that found the man in the safe and you had interviewed him. Fill in the table below thinking about what you would write if you were to write an article about what happened.

T
Title
The black hole
R
Reveal - Who was involved? Where did it happen? When did it happen? Why did it happen? How?
The man, in his office,around night time none knows it is the future
E
Events - what happened? In the order they happened.
He was printing something and then a pic of a black hole came up and he figured out that he could put his hand in it so he grabbed a snickers bar from the snack machine and money from the safe but ended up getting stuck in the safe
E
Ending - How did it end? Final thoughts.
He was caught
we are learning how to use a tree structure together as a class we have been working in groups  doing this we have been writing about the injured mountain biker and the back hole these are 2 great stories they are amazing and mind blowing stories. They impressed the class and miss berry i love these stories i would read these all over again  but anyway we had fun as a group doing this we all loved doing this task .

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